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by SvenReyter
Thu Feb 26, 2015 10:28 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Trailer for my new Series - HINGE
Replies: 11
Views: 1591

Re: Trailer for my new Series - HINGE

This looks great, I love the character designs. Nice work on the background music as well.
by SvenReyter
Sat Apr 12, 2014 6:10 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

Thanks Henton, I agree, I was going for an awkwardness between the doctor and the assistance. It just didn't work well for me, it just dragged in the final edit. And yeah...I work in a pharmacy, so I'm well aware of the IV aspect. That's actually part of the reason why I found it (300cc) so disturbi...
by SvenReyter
Sat Apr 12, 2014 5:48 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Romeo and JuliANT
Replies: 6
Views: 864

Re: Romeo and JuliANT

It looks great. One thing I think may help is to add some outdoor sounds. Birds, cars....that type of thing. The voice over comes in kind of abruptly and the absence of sound is a little odd in some parts. Nice video, I really like the drawing of the old man.
by SvenReyter
Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:13 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

Thanks for the pdf link. It looks interesting. The switch layer is working out pretty well. I've got a lot of drawing ahead of me.

I'll try that as well Little Yamori.

Thanks
by SvenReyter
Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:07 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: New character concept
Replies: 5
Views: 1248

Re: New character concept

I like it. I love the eyes. The only thing that stands out as a little off to me is the hair and the shorts. The hair line looks a little busy, the 2nd layer beneath the top is the first thing that caught my attention. And, the shorts kind of looks a little like he has an erection. Not a lot, just t...
by SvenReyter
Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:56 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

Sargumphigaus, I thought there would be issue doing the turn with switch layering for some reason. I thought that I may have issues with bone movement or the eyes and mouth switches if I made the head a switch layer. I'll give that a try tonight. The body turn video is interesting, I'll have to try ...
by SvenReyter
Thu Apr 03, 2014 2:47 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

I'm not pissed off about anything. I'm fine with what Danimal said about the cartoon, I never really expected anyone on the forum to like it and I seen his cartoons...didn't care for them anymore than he cares for mine. Not making a judgement on the animation, as I have no grounds to do that, But, t...
by SvenReyter
Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:57 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

I'm fine with critical honesty. I just think the way with which he delivered said honesty was oddly aggressive, and, there was no reason for that. I really couldn't care less if people like the writing. I just wanted some feedback on the drawings and animation. Last time a few people gave me some gr...
by SvenReyter
Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:39 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

Jesus, what is wrong with you? I'm sorry you wasted your time, but, I really don't understand why you feel the need to attack something that I innocently posted to get a little feedback on.
by SvenReyter
Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:24 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Re: Koalas Cartoon

Fair enough. Danimal, I did say there was a lot of unnecessary swearing specifically for your benefit.
by SvenReyter
Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:49 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Koalas Cartoon
Replies: 26
Views: 3160

Koalas Cartoon

I finished this a few weeks ago, it's the first proper episode of a cartoon I posted here a few months ago. I appreciate the tips from the first post, especially from Lumpy who pointed out that I needed to blur the backgrounds a bit. Thanks, that helped a lot. Fair warning, still a lot of unnecessar...
by SvenReyter
Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:39 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: A animation parody i did
Replies: 14
Views: 1820

Re: A animation parody i did

Danimal, I didn't mean any disrespect to the board. I like this forum. But, I've noticed a good bit of feedback and critique posts focus way too much on the choice of language. This just isn't the place to post videos like this. PeverallVibes, I think using a quality microphone would help your overa...
by SvenReyter
Mon Jan 20, 2014 5:50 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: A animation parody i did
Replies: 14
Views: 1820

Re: A animation parody i did

PeverallVibes, this board is fairly conservative. It's a great resource for software tips and techniques. But, I really don't think you will find an audience for your video here.
by SvenReyter
Sat Jan 18, 2014 3:39 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: my first animation
Replies: 15
Views: 1832

Re: my first animation

Nice animation. It worked really well with that song.
by SvenReyter
Wed Jan 15, 2014 4:04 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: My Abercrombie & Fitch Parody
Replies: 4
Views: 801

Re: My Abercrombie & Fitch Parody

Nice work on the video. But, your cartoon is very insensitive to those of us who have been unwittingly sodomized in an A&F. I'm just saying...think about the victims.