I liked the second one much better because the turning movement is more realistic, as already explained quite well by the other posters. It is very cool and inspiring to hear your enthusiasm for becoming a producer of anime, you clearly have the talent it's obvious even in this short animation. So ...

It's a good start, and I agree that the second clip is better executed. As far as your approach, I'm not sure how long you've been using anime studio, or what other software you have experience with... but there's definitely a learning curve, either learning the program from scratch, or "unlea...

So I should probably just follow that method and keep the lines organized like I did then. Dont you think? Indeed. And yes, the hair in the first one didn't look right at all. Alright thank you for the advice! :D But besides the dark strokes and coloring and such the second one looked good thats go...

The second one looks way better because it happens quickly. The character designs look good too. On the second one I did over view it and there were no mistakes which was good. Also for the first one I already found out my problem... I was very unorganized with my points and that's what messed made...

Hello I believe this is my first post on here! :D Okay guys I want some honest feedback... I am going to be posting two videos both of them have a head turn and lip sync.. The first one is a character I drew from a anime series called CLANNAD and the character is Nagisa Furukawa and the second one I...