script done

jackass · Post by **jackass** » Mon Sep 28, 2009 3:51 am

I've deleted this script beacuse I no longer plan to use it. I will post a finale one that Im satisfied with that will be use.

jackass · Post by **jackass** » Mon Sep 28, 2009 4:01 am

Change in plans.

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Mon Sep 28, 2009 1:32 pm

Scrawl out a couple uh drawings and record some audio-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVN1XiuE ... annel_page

That way you can get a better feel if it's going to work or not on the visual level (as you can see by my storyboard, that dog wouldn't hunt, so it got pitched)-

It's a little more work but then again, animating is a lot of work-

(I'm assuming Yo is a green tiger, you never actually stated it)

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jackass · Post by **jackass** » Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:18 pm

back to the drawing board and celtix.

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:32 pm

cool-

jackass · Post by **jackass** » Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:44 am

ah i'll start over again and pitch this crap be ready to see a new script. I wonder if i being too picky.

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:53 am

It just seems like a very short script. Is that only a portion?

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Tue Sep 29, 2009 3:07 am

sinclair wrote:Scrawl out a couple uh drawings and record some audio-

Sinclair is right. Draw your story as an animatic. It's easy to create and keeps you motivated as you invest the many hours to finish an animation project.

Don't give up. Break up the project into small tasks and reward yourself at each step.

sinclair · Post by **sinclair** » Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:22 pm

I find that I'd rather share a storyboard than a script just because screenplays can be interpreted on a per reader basis-

With a story board you can see the concept more clearly-

Plus you'll have a better idea of just how much animation (workload) you'll be getting yourself into-

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jackass · Post by **jackass** » Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:02 pm

Im having a writer's block. All the scripts I started disatisfied me and I threw them away. Im going to delete the one above but hopefully I'll have a new one in it's place.

Mikdog · Post by **Mikdog** » Fri Oct 02, 2009 1:49 am

Please write a story about a little piece of cheese that wants to sing karaoke but nobody lets him in the Japanese karaoke booths because there are signs on the doors that say 'no cheese sing' so he becomes a hobo cheese and then he sings songs about how down on his luck he is, and then a manager comes around the corner and the cheese is singing his woes away in a gutter, and the manager guys hears it and signs him up for his record label, 'Big Cheese Karaoke Records' then the cheese becomes a star and when he wants to go back to the Japanese Karaoke bar to be all smug with the bar owner, he finds the karaoke bar's been turned into a cheese factory.

jackass · Post by **jackass** » Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:03 am

maybe after the first episode.

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:06 am

Mikdog, that was hilarious.

bleep · Post by **bleep** » Fri Oct 02, 2009 2:11 pm

Mikdog wrote: the cheese is singing his woes away in a gutter

I'm glad mr. cheese didn't fell in the sewers, because he can get out of the gutter any time, but he can't get out once he fells in the sewer.
You might not have heard of a saying, because i just made it "out of gutter into the sewers"

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:02 pm

mikdog wrote:...when he wants to go back to the Japanese Karaoke bar to be all smug with the bar owner, he finds the karaoke bar's been turned into a cheese factory.

How often have we heard that tale of woe?