Hello everyone!
Just wanting to wish you all a happy Halloween with my newest cartoon creation: "A Super-Awesome Halloween '09".
Check it out! I think it turned out quite good.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVcDVN-jj78
Enjoy and happy Halloween!
A Super-Awesome Halloween '09 (NEW CARTOON!)
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The humor never quite connected with me, but you've really improved a lot both in animation and design, especially compared to the first Average Joe episode. You're skills haven't leveled off yet, so I'm curious to see what you'll be doing a year from now. I'd love to see more action adventure material at some point, but you gotta go with what you like.
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It's pretty good...music, voice acting, and characters design in particularly. I'd suggest adding more cues in the background, whether it's a basement, hell, or Bradley's fevered imagination. Also, shorten the intro and consider putting the credits at the end. Thirty-three seconds is way too long to wait for the action to begin.
Overall, a decent effort.
Overall, a decent effort.
Haha I usually put all my credits at the end. Just thought I'd try something different but yeah, thanks for letting me know. I'll probably just put them at the end from now on.neeters_guy wrote: Also, shorten the intro and consider putting the credits at the end. Thirty-three seconds is way too long to wait for the action to begin.