A Super-Awesome Halloween '09 (NEW CARTOON!)

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:24 pm

Hello everyone!

Just wanting to wish you all a happy Halloween with my newest cartoon creation: "A Super-Awesome Halloween '09".

Check it out! I think it turned out quite good.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVcDVN-jj78

Enjoy and happy Halloween!

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:07 am

I tried watching it three separate times and it just kept freezing up halfway through.

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:11 am

Really? Weird. Doesn't do that for me.

Anyone else having that problem?

J. Baker · Post by **J. Baker** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:15 am

Funny as always. Nice work! I even signed up as a member on your site.

J. Baker · Post by **J. Baker** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:16 am

spoooze! wrote:Really? Weird. Doesn't do that for me.

Anyone else having that problem?

Played fine here.

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:19 am

Funny as always.

Thanks!

J. Baker wrote:Nice work! I even signed up as a member on your site.

Ah yes! I saw that. Thanks for joining!

Played fine here.

Ok, good.

DarthFurby · Post by **DarthFurby** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:03 am

The humor never quite connected with me, but you've really improved a lot both in animation and design, especially compared to the first Average Joe episode. You're skills haven't leveled off yet, so I'm curious to see what you'll be doing a year from now. I'd love to see more action adventure material at some point, but you gotta go with what you like.

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:21 am

It's pretty good...music, voice acting, and characters design in particularly. I'd suggest adding more cues in the background, whether it's a basement, hell, or Bradley's fevered imagination. Also, shorten the intro and consider putting the credits at the end. Thirty-three seconds is way too long to wait for the action to begin.

Overall, a decent effort.

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:08 am

neeters_guy wrote: Also, shorten the intro and consider putting the credits at the end. Thirty-three seconds is way too long to wait for the action to begin.

Haha I usually put all my credits at the end. Just thought I'd try something different but yeah, thanks for letting me know. I'll probably just put them at the end from now on.