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What is your favourite Character from The "Toons Of Movie Talk Show"?

Poll ended at Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:28 pm

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Sahir7
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Animated Talk Show

Post by Sahir7 »

Greetings Everyone 8)
I have recently animated a Talk Show with anime Studio. Its called The "Toons Of Movie Talk Show"
heres the link, Please check it out and let me know what you think:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_Sv8STvOr8

Cheers :D
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lpbaker
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Nice work, great looking characters, convincing acting. Just one thing that looked odd to me; should the side of the chair cover Lolli's hip? The chair doesn't look like it has raised sides ... ?

~ Lindsay
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My most recent animation --> http://www.vimeo.com/13665264
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Post by fracturedray »

I enjoyed it. I think the character designs and animations were very well done.

Here are a few comments...
The opening credits
It is fine giving people credit where it is due but I almost closed the movie because the credits were so long. I'd suggest moving them to the end or shorting them. The animation for them is interesting but I guess I'm not patient enough for them. It could just be me...

More important. Please give some love to the background. Add some props, lighting and decor. Right now you have a curving wall (floor) with a flat screen. Curve the screen also if you are going to make the floor curved. And last but not least, the characters all have outlines but the background did not. Equality. :)
Hi animation world.
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