Shinobi Noir- Chapt 1 3minute anime-ish thing

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kellz5460
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Shinobi Noir- Chapt 1 3minute anime-ish thing

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meh...i was bored and depressed so i made this thing- The monologue intro ends like at 0:45 if you dont want to listen


watch here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZH87LHJcVFQ
Last edited by kellz5460 on Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by EijiNizuma »

I thought it was great. You could maybe tweak it a little by working on some of the walking shots or little nuances like eyebrow raises, twitches, blinks etc when someone is in shot and not doing anything. But overall I thought it was fantastic and bordering on pro anime. very inspiring.
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Post by kellz5460 »

thx- i'll admit I wasn't happy with the walking animation but I redid that several times and still didn't like it - but, i'm still learning
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Post by KOMBATMATTT »

looked really great but the walking animation looked abit funny, why where you depressed?
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Post by neuromester »

I really like it. I think it looks great.
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Post by shift »

Wow, excellent
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