My new animation

iomsys · Post by **iomsys** » Tue Aug 09, 2011 8:23 pm

Hi all,

you can see my new animation on youtube .. . Insector.
Please, any advice is worth taking (sorry for my english, i'm french)

Friendly, Laurent

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TOuK7uhBAQ

guhitgalaw · Post by **guhitgalaw** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:08 am

Nice animation. You have a potential as a director.

Cheers,
Gilbert
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CGArtFan · Post by **CGArtFan** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:42 am

How long did it take for you to make this animation?

iomsys · Post by **iomsys** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:12 pm

Thank all,

I started the opening scenes a month ago almost to the day.

Friendly Laurent

2ner · Post by **2ner** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:41 pm

There are several good things about your animation, like the writing and character design. There are several things that bug me though, like the smoke, washed-out overexposure in tractor scenes, and the strobing corn plant in the side view of the race car tire.

iomsys · Post by **iomsys** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:55 pm

2ner wrote:There are several good things about your animation, like the writing and character design. There are several things that bug me though, like the smoke, washed-out overexposure in tractor scenes, and the strobing corn plant in the side view of the race car tire.

That is why I would show my anime on this forum. I have a lot of work to get to something decent. But I am in no hurry, it's a hobby not my job.
thank you for these critical,

Friendly Laurent

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