Idrin

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Idrin

Post by shift » Sun Jan 26, 2014 5:31 am

An animation I did for my brother's business in Japan
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Re: Idrin

Post by Little Yamori » Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:14 am

Looks nice, but you had one minor mistake in the Japanese, where you put "wa" it should be " は" instead of "わ", they're pronounced the same, but the first one is a subject marker, while the later is simply a phonetic.
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Re: Idrin

Post by Danimal » Mon Jan 27, 2014 4:55 pm

Looks good to me - nice work!
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Re: Idrin

Post by shift » Tue Jan 28, 2014 4:16 am

Funny you should say that Little Yamori. My brother in Japan did the Japanese not me and just 2 days ago he told me that there was a translation error that he was correcting to put out another version of the video. I guess what you spotted is what he was talking about.
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Re: Idrin

Post by Little Yamori » Tue Jan 28, 2014 7:44 am

Glad he caught it too. It's minor, but Japanese viewers will notice right away. I hope the commercial for you guys is successful :D
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