Episode 1 of Raith Kennedy

[PeverallVibez]

I hope you like it, its much better than my other things i posted, and please say what you like and what i can improve on, your feed back will be most helpful https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YxNyx-u3-zo

[Danimal]

Hey, I know this story! I think we talked about it once or twice.

Anyway, the hemorrhoid ad was my favorite part. The intro was nice too to set up the story. The animation worked well, but the story seemed rather unfocused, like it was just being made up as it went along. Also the audio kept dropping out. I'm guessing it was panning around with the camera, but I only watch with one earbud in when I'm at work.

It's promising, it needs some definite tightening up and more direction.

[PeverallVibez]

thx, yh i binded the audio to the mouth/head, i got told to do that and also i write every script i do, but episode 2 will be much better so thx for your feed back