Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

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Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by lwaxana » Mon Aug 04, 2014 4:05 am


Hi, everyone! I'm in the planning phase for my entry for the 11 second club this month. I still have some adjustments to make to the rough animation before I do the actual animation. I'd love to hear any suggestions you all have to improve it while there is still time to incorporate ideas/suggestions.
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by Danimal » Mon Aug 04, 2014 2:18 pm

It's looks good. I can't help but notice the guy seems to have no sheath for his sword - youch!

Looking forward to seeing the progress.
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by lwaxana » Sun Aug 17, 2014 7:00 am

Haha, thanks Danimal! I added the sheath. I think I'm in over my head with this cape-thing, though. Way too many details to keep track of. :?




[Edit: Updated with latest WIP]
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by shift » Sun Aug 17, 2014 8:05 pm

Liking it so far.
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by jahnocli » Sun Aug 17, 2014 8:24 pm

I always look forward to your stuff -- the simplicity (much harder than it looks), the colour harmonies, and your animation is definitely improving.The guy turning in two stages is a case in point -- it really defines the dialogue well.
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Post by Danimal » Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:17 pm

Definitely coming along. Looks great!
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by neeters_guy » Fri Aug 22, 2014 12:46 am

I really like your style. (Wish I had time to do an 11 second club entry myself.) Good luck.
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Post by AmigaMan » Fri Aug 22, 2014 10:13 am

This is looking excellent. Can't wait to see it finished :D
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by TheMinahBird » Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:04 pm

(: too bad it's only 11 seconds.
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Post by FeeblyWeebly » Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:28 pm

I enjoy your animation style, have you done anything longer? or do you have a youtube channel
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by lwaxana » Sun Aug 24, 2014 1:46 am

Thank you all for the kind comments! It is really motivating. Feebly--My vimeo account has most of my animation up. It's really not much, as I unfortunately don't get much time to animate. But I actually designed these characters for a web series I have in mind, and this is serving as a sort of proof of concept. I plan to make a youtube account for stuff related to that project soon.
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by lwaxana » Sun Aug 24, 2014 9:27 pm

Latest Version:

Keep trying to "fix" things and they get even more messed up. :?
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by Danimal » Mon Aug 25, 2014 2:52 pm

Looks great to me - love the subtle touch of the mushrooms in the background.
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by lwaxana » Sun Aug 31, 2014 4:25 pm

I created a youtube channel and posted the latest version that I'm entering in the competition. There are still some draftsmanship issues bugging me, but it's time to move forward! Thanks everyone for your feedback on this! :D
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Re: Secret Quest (11 second club August WIP)

Post by Danimal » Mon Sep 01, 2014 1:29 pm

Looks great - keep us posted on how you do in the contest!
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