Raith Kennedy ep 2

[PeverallVibez]

Hope you lot like it, im working with someone and they told me to do short vids to keep you guys interested, hope you like

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaNASuN ... PFxV7PxVng

[AmigaMan]

That's pretty good. The only thing that stood out was the lack of variation in shots. Generally no shot should last more than an average of 6 seconds. When the guy opens the door the following long shot of them talking lasts a minute! Cutting to close ups of each character talking, from a different angle if possible, would have made it much more interesting to watch. Over all though it was good and a vast improvement on your earlier work and I did watch it all through a couple of times

[PeverallVibez]

Thx i would keep that in mind to do shots every 6 secs, also i got told by my friend to do short cartoons so i can keep my viewers watching and interested

[lwaxana]

haha, that was awesome! And I recognized Jon Canham's voice. Cool that you guys are working together.

[PeverallVibez]

Yeah, Jon is good and hes like the only british person i know who can do voice work and animate