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a short animation i did

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 12:14 am
by Equalrights4animals

Re: a short animation i did

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 3:44 am
by Pinesal
It's cool I guess. It was done well enough. The story wasn't very interesting and the voice acting was a little weird. Did you have children provide the voices?

I will say it was very clean looking and the animation timing was pretty good. Keep it up.

Re: a short animation i did

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 12:01 pm
by Danimal
Looks good! Easy enough to follow along and a kind of silly ending. Nice work!

Re: a short animation i did

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:21 am
by lwaxana
Nice flight animation! The wing motion looks great. I think the birds would look even better if their beaks overlapped their faces a bit, to look more dimensional.