Bad Red Ballon

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kooobus
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Bad Red Ballon

Post by kooobus » Tue May 31, 2016 11:36 pm

Hello there fellow animators!

I just wanted to share my latest animation done in AS. It's nothing special, just random idea that came to my mind. I am beginner so I would like to hear some meaningful criticisms from you. You are probably more experienced then I'm and this is why I like to know what is your opinion.



Cheers!
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by funksmaname » Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:49 am

Nice characters/style, I think it's a good job! only thing I spotted was a little slide in the walk cycle...
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by Fuzatron » Wed Jun 01, 2016 1:57 am

That's a great little animation! Really like how you gave it a lot of style too :D
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by jahnocli » Wed Jun 01, 2016 9:28 am

Nicely done. I liked the introduction of the bully, and the overall style too.
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by kooobus » Wed Jun 01, 2016 10:28 am

Thank you for reply. I really appreciate your opinion and this is really important to me. For now I'd like to focus on these little projects to practise basics of animation.

Cheers!
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by exobunker » Sat Jun 04, 2016 12:07 pm

a good (bad ?) surprise. :o
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by kooobus » Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:14 pm

exobunker wrote:a good (bad ?) surprise. :o
I guess you liked it :D
Any other thoughts about this animation?
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by picapau » Sun Jun 05, 2016 2:05 am

like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.
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Re: Bad Red Ballon

Post by kooobus » Sun Jun 05, 2016 7:14 am

picapau wrote:like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.
Thank you picapau ;)
Yeah I noticed that slide when it was too late to correct it. Still I need to practise more on those little things.
Talking about bullys character, I tried to introduce him in original way and use skull on his shirt to create a suspense.

Cheers!
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