I just wanted to share my latest animation done in AS. It's nothing special, just random idea that came to my mind. I am beginner so I would like to hear some meaningful criticisms from you. You are probably more experienced then I'm and this is why I like to know what is your opinion.
Cheers!
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:49 am
by funksmaname
Nice characters/style, I think it's a good job! only thing I spotted was a little slide in the walk cycle...
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2016 1:57 am
by Fuzatron
That's a great little animation! Really like how you gave it a lot of style too
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2016 9:28 am
by jahnocli
Nicely done. I liked the introduction of the bully, and the overall style too.
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2016 10:28 am
by kooobus
Thank you for reply. I really appreciate your opinion and this is really important to me. For now I'd like to focus on these little projects to practise basics of animation.
Cheers!
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2016 12:07 pm
by exobunker
a good (bad ?) surprise.
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2016 9:14 pm
by kooobus
exobunker wrote:a good (bad ?) surprise.
I guess you liked it
Any other thoughts about this animation?
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 2:05 am
by picapau
like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.
Re: Bad Red Ballon
Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 7:14 am
by kooobus
picapau wrote:like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.
Thank you picapau
Yeah I noticed that slide when it was too late to correct it. Still I need to practise more on those little things.
Talking about bullys character, I tried to introduce him in original way and use skull on his shirt to create a suspense.