Vlogging and social media (my first animation)

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Hassan
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Vlogging and social media (my first animation)

Post by Hassan » Thu May 03, 2018 7:19 pm

This is my first animation on youtube. Please, give me your opinion and what are things need to be improved. Maybe you will not understand what is being said because it is in Arabic. Basically, it talks about sharing everthing on social media can ruin people's lives.
https://youtu.be/-mBltaMf7Mg
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Re: Vlogging and social media (my first animation)

Post by mrc » Fri May 04, 2018 7:10 am

I like the design and animation of the couple!

But I found the game-style idle animation (breathing) somewhat distracting. And at least once the girl's fringe curl would not stop swinging about from all the bone physics.

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Hassan
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Re: Vlogging and social media (my first animation)

Post by Hassan » Thu May 17, 2018 9:11 pm

Thanks alot Marc :) . I will try to fix that in my next animation. You are right about idle. Unlike 3d animation, in 2d animation I can get away with the character that is not moving.
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Re: Vlogging and social media (my first animation)

Post by ahzra » Sat May 19, 2018 6:55 pm

فكره وتنفيذ رائع تسلم ايدك :)
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