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Hi Jan, something good in the making, and the music is right too, you'll probably arrive at the same conclusion, that whats big in Korea and Japan are Troupes of girls, girl bands are big in that part of the world, so cloning the figure and offset should match whats going in the Girl Band scene in Korea and Japan.

Pretty cool - although her skirt and chest seem to have a life of their own.

The arm pit looks a bit off like she is growing wings in her back, and The shirt is rich white which is lacking of highlights and shadows that would make them more depth. The chest is ending up looking a bit flat and wide. I recommend giving the shirt some level of color so you can add a soft edge brighter vector on top of her chest. and add a mask shadow on the chest underside. use the shading and highlights to add size of the chest without having to pancake them out to the side.

You have pretty good drawing skills you could add texture to it and use smart mesh on a drawn shirt. I do like the way you added the back side of the shirt sleeves. The head turn is done well.

I have seen you other works and the girl floating down the river was done very well. You are very talented!