Twit or Tweet episode 3-Game Night

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Twit or Tweet episode 3-Game Night

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3rd in a series of political satires based on "Tiny World Leaders" depicting our leaders as children in their present day.
Would like to here some critique on this series, (concept, content, humor...) please feel free good or bad only constructive Thanks.
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For me, it lacked structure. Sometimes improv can work really well, at other times it looks strained. Why was Trump at the microphone? Addressing the nation about what? We never found out. If he's going to be constantly interrupted, they have to be interrupting something, don't they? Or maybe I've got it wrong...
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