Short film...... MOLAI

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Jitendas.10
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Short film...... MOLAI

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Here is the link of my short film...
All tne positive and negative comments are wel come..

https://youtu.be/CuR_zdMwCGY


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Hello Jiten,

it looks really great, I love the use of blur especially!
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Nice work!

Suggestion: Instead of "zooming" into to reframe your shots, rely more on hard cuts, like they would do in a movie/cartoon/TV. It'll give it a more professional feel. If you do decide to push-in, make sure it is motivated by the content. An example of this would be a character discovering something important and pushing into a close-up to show the reaction. Or slowly pushing in while a character is lost in thought.

I think you did a great job on this and chose a really suitable story. Excited to see what you do next!
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Thank you Tobbg for loving my work
And thank you for your tips rafael, i ll follow it....

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Nice to see a full story, simple but effective.
Good advice from Raphael too.
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Thank u chucky

Will try to improve in my next film.

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A very pleasant story
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Little Yamori
Thank you vry much.
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